Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Unheard Voices

There are times in life, when you hear some voices,
There are times in life, when you hear some noises,
And you begin to wonder, was that real ?
And you begin to wonder, should I feel ?

You need to understand that voice,
Don't think of it as some noise,
Coz it maybe your soul speaking,
Don't think it was just your head ringing.

Don't kill that voice, just hear it out,
You might just clear your pot of doubts,
And will realize life indeed can be fun,
And its only as simple as you wanted one.

There are times in life, when you hear some voices,
There are times in life, when you hear some noises,
And don't try to wonder, was that real ?
Just hear your voice, and you will feel.

-- Karan Parwani

3 comments:

ayesha said...

, i like it its good ..although i feel you have compramised on language to maintain the rhyme scheme..dont do that, the romantics dispelled the technacalits of poetry..try free verse next time..happy writing!!

waffinz said...

!!!***...WEll itz a gr8 thing 2 hv a look at i make it imp ...cuz u learn alot from te voice of oterz heartz ...so tats wat ive realised is enough 2 describe bout tiz all ...!! i m imprsd tat uve writte alot in ur page 2 explain the life ........!! keep in touch through tis page havin much more tan a bit uve written in it ..!! will b visitin alwayz cuz i lov te voice ov hearts !! so keep it up 4 Uss...***!!!)

rachna said...

its a nice introspective poem... u have chosen very simple words and gone easy on the english.but i like theme nonetheless